Request Cirtique's comments and suggestions for improvements

[naturegrapher]

I am an amature when it comes to photography andI welcomecritique's comments onsome ofthe photographs that I have captured.... Iam also mentioning the titles that Ihave given for each of these photographs that Icaptured so as to state the thoughts that were going on in my head when I captured them.


1) Man & man made structuresboth fall apart with time


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3058/2846777786_e49a947737_m.jpg ("http://community.the-digital-picture.com/photos/29085025@N04/2846777786/)


2) I have nothing to say


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3220/2870539816_d622945479.jpg?v=0

[Stefan Stuart Fletcher]

It's hard to offer anything meaningful for these deep and impressive images. Your subjects are fascinating and expressive, and you've done an admirable job conveying your fascination. On a purely personal aesthetic note, I might be inclined to heighten the contrast in keeping with the drama of their faces, but I can easily understand why you haven't.


As for No. 1's title, I was first struck by your subject's vigour and forcefulness, not by how he is falling apart with time. Am I missing something?


I would love to see more.

[naturegrapher]

I was comparing this person who lives off the side walk with the wall on which he was resting. Both of them have been there for years and seems to be falling apart as time pass by.