View Full Version : Sea Side Beach in northern Florida... Picture for Critique...
GSPhoto
01-05-2009, 03:58 PM
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f/22 25sec. 100ISO, 40mm. Taken with 50D with 24-105L.
<span style="font-size: small; font-family: Times New Roman;"]If it was doable, I would have added a bit more foregroundof the coast line wrapping around more to the right. Perhaps raised the horizon up so it was around the 2/3 part of the vertical.
<span style="font-size: small; font-family: Times New Roman;"]Nice sky.
Anthony
01-05-2009, 11:03 PM
I agree that it might be a little better if either the edge of the coast and/or the sky were 2/3 of the way into the frame, but otherwise, great shot!
HiFiGuy1
01-31-2009, 12:27 PM
GSPhoto,
I am an amateur, but I will say that I like the fact that you bisected the image with the horizon. It seems ever so slightly dark, but it's a beautiful shot. Where was it taken?
GSPhoto
01-31-2009, 08:26 PM
At St. Andrews Park in Panama City Beach, Florida.
lightning_chaser
02-05-2009, 09:57 AM
This would make for an outstanding HDR shot. A little detail in the rocky shore....perfect. However, it's a great shot as it stands. Neat how the initial waterfront looks like a standing pool with a foamy coat. I love long exposure work. Keep it up!
Colin
02-05-2009, 02:11 PM
It's beautiful.
I agree with getting more of the shore, if you could.
I have no opinion about where the horizon is, but I'd crop the top until you're near where the clouds start turning pink. that's where it really starts getting interesting.
But, yeah, beautiful.