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Dumien
03-10-2009, 02:44 PM
So, how are these two? They were taken in Florence.





http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2262/dpp00551filteredwtmk.jpg


Canon XSi
Canon EF 70-200mm f2.8
1/400 sec
F6.3
70mm
ISO 100





http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/415/dpp0057wtmk.jpg


Canon XSi
Canon EF 70-200mm F2.8
1/125 sec
F6.3
200mm
ISO 200


on this one I played a little bit to get the wall black and leave the reflection on the windows. They're seen from outside, I found it pretty...poetic, so to say :)





and now to you: what do you think?


Andy


[edited to change images, since the watermark was found so disturbing, and I had a couple of seconds to change it :)]

Colin
03-10-2009, 02:49 PM
I tend to like to push the darker parts down into the black too, but I would have liked to see a little detail down there. I love the composition, and what I can see is lovely.

Madison
03-10-2009, 03:58 PM
The ridiculously large copyright statements are SO distracting that I cannot even begin to describe how tacky it makes the pictures. And I mean this in a constructive way. Don't do that to your work. Seriously. It's messy, cheap and degrades what would otherwise be better pictures.

mpphoto12
03-10-2009, 04:09 PM
i think they are pretty boring and have no detail along with the extremely obviouse use of rule of thirds in the first one.

Dumien
03-10-2009, 04:11 PM
haha, I had no time to set the watermarking software when I processed these two ^^" sorry if it bothers you so much - but if it's somehow comforting they're never that big :)