First Senior Shoot: Critique! Critique! Critique! Please!!

I just wrapped up my first ever senior portrait shoot about a day ago. It was a practice shoot with a friend (& client) in preparation for a shoot coming up with her in a week or so. We found some sick nasty locations, so the shoot was a success.


I'd be honored if you would give me some critique on what I consider the best image of the day. The link is below. Sorry I couldn't embed it, but for client-privacy reasons, I figured this was the best way to ask for help. Link is here. I've only had time to seriously edit just this one photo. I went through DPP for exposure and such, then used PS CS1 and a Scott Kelby book to do some retouching and lighting fixes.


Any critiques are moreee than welcome. Please don't hold back. I'm looking to do the best job I possibly can and your comments will help tremendously. Tips on lighting, posing, post processing, etc. Anything you think would make a better photo.


For what it's worth, here is a list of my gear. If you would do something differently, esp. lighting-wise, with the gear I have, don't hesitate to tell me.


-20D


-EF-S 18-55 f/3.5-5.6 (Blahh!) (I may be borrowing a wide angle L lens from a friend. Fingers crossed)


-EF 50mm f/1.8 II (love this)


-EF 70-200 f/4L (lens of choice, but limited use for portraits on a 1.6 crop body)


-Speedlite 430EXII (newest addition and loving this!)


- Hoping to get a 2 light kit (sans strobes) from MPEX with Cactus V2s trigger/recievers. I'd still only have one flash, butoneportable flash would be better thanoneon axis flash no?)





Thanks for reading, and any advice,


-Rodger





Edit: Hopefully fixed the link.

The link is not working for me. It says I do not have permissions

Sorry about that,


Should be working now. I'm still relatively new to Flickr's privacy settings.

I like it. I do not see anything to critisize here. Show us more.

Thankyou clemmb.


Im going through them as fast as I can, but I had another (smaller) shoot today and am leaving to shoot a week of a summer camp on Sunday (not sure if there will be internet). Regardless, I'll post a new reply in here whenever I update the set though.


Again, thanks :)

A few things:


power lines in the background


I personally don't like the plants that are covering up part of the subject


There is not a lot of emotion in the subjects face





lighting wise its great; no harsh shadows on the face, etc...





EDIT: Ilikeyour flickr photostream; some great stuff in there

crosbyharbison, first, thankyou for your reply.


Second, I was thinking the same thing about the plants in front of the subject. I'll remove those on the real shoot. Slipped my mind for this one. (Thank God for the practice shoot huh?)


I'll see what I can do cloning the powerlines out.


Getting subjects to open up and show some of their personality is definitely one of the things I have the most trouble with. I assume it becomes more natural the more shoots you do.


Thanks for the feedback and the kind words!


-Rodger

For me it's the skin tone. The color of the hands doesn't match the color of the face. And I don't know if it's just my screen but I think it's a little reddish.

Yes skin tone is not very good unless the girl has a very strange red cast to her skin in real life too.


That is all I can add apart from what was already said.


LOVING some of the stuff in your photostream by the way!


Good luck! And have fun with it!

Nice, I like.

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For me it's the skin tone. The color of the hands doesn't match the color of the face. And I don't know if it's just my screen but I think it's a little reddish.
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<span style="text-decoration: line-through;"]I thought that was just a teenage girls tendency togo a little heavy on the makeup. [:P]


Maybe her makup doesn't quite match her skin tone.