Re: With fingers crossed...
I think you could have cropped a little more on the right side. To me, that part of the picture is distracting. But then again, it might be not or someone more experienced than me.
Apart from that, it's a nice shot; I like the subject expression =)
Re: With fingers crossed...
You may be right about the cropping. I was trying to keep all the smiles in the picture. But just the little brother is probably enough. I'm not sure what I'd do about the bigger brother's arm, though.