Some Shots i Took the Other Day

These are some shots taken with a Rebel T1i. Most of the processing was made on DPP, just added the signature onPhotoshopsince i haven't found a way to do it any easier. lol. Opinions andsuggestionsare welcomed.


These are an italian male model and a russian female model. Location South beach. 15th floor.


http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4043/...9b0ccf8fb5.jpg


1/125, F12.9, ISO-400, 28-70 2.8 L @ 39mm





http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2749/...0ab534872a.jpg


1/128, F12.9, ISO-400, 28-70 2.8 L @ 31mm





http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/...835e2fa30a.jpg


1/128, F4.6, ISO-400, 17-40 4.0 L @ 17mm

Third Shot is Awesome!


Second is really, really good. It just looks like it needs some post effect to make it really pop. May a little more contrast and less saturation.


First one, the burnt background is too burnt especially with the contrast of the background through the glass below the railing.

Booking tickets to Russia right now [:P]


Great set - particularly like the third shot.

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Originally Posted by btaylor

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Haha I was thinking in the same direction [:P]


I like the second and third shot the most, love the backlighting. First picture misses too much background for me. The posing of the girl in the second is a bit strange to be honest. The "big dude" is looking very relaxed, chilled out and the girl just seems to be a little bit ??stiff?? I'm not sure how to say it.


Anyway very nice shots!


Jan

keith


u know that i hadn't even noticed that. Damn, lol, now im looking at it and im dissapointed ;( idk whether to white out the glassed part or idk what else to do, cuz i took it on jpg so i can't work with lower exposure.. ugh!!! i thought it was a good pix and i was blinded by it lol.


thanks for the tip though really opened my eyes!.


About the second one, let me see what i can do to it. But now im upset at the beach view through the glass also!!! ;(


third one now looking at it, i think i need to white out the building details from everywhere.. and i really dislike her face being so lit up..





btaylor & sheiky
why booking to russia? Come to miami beach there are PLENTY to choose from ;). Specially now on spring break & beach time.





Thanks for all the tips guys.

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Originally Posted by trosky

First one now looking at it, i think i need to white out the building details from everywhere.. and i really dislike her face being so lit up..

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I think you're talking about the 3rd and I think it should be an easy fix, so don't worry too much [;)]

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Originally Posted by trosky

why booking to russia? Come to miami beach there are PLENTY to choose from ;). Specially now on spring break & beach time.

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Haha I would love to go there sometime, but Miami isn't really high on my priority list. Certainly not for that one reason [:P]I don't complain for what I have now...at all [A]... but I'd love to go to America someday.


Anyway good luck with post-processing I guess?

thanks alot for the tips & yeah, if ur sometime on Miami, let me know.

I love the 3rd shot. 1st shot would be a 2nd. Not too fond of the 3rd. Nice shooting though :D