Originally Posted by Jeff Lucia
Here's a suggestion that might or might not be helpful...the overall mood of both shots would be a better match for breakfast than for cake. It's not just the yellowish-green cast of the first image, although that does contribute to the "morning" look. Have you considered using background colors that are more in the earth tone range, or a dark wood table with a dark brown or maroon linen napkin? One other idea would be to use lighting that's a little less smooth -- think evening and drama and moodiness. It will accentuate the specialness of the cake. Another suggestion would be to put the fork on the left or very carefully arrange it on the plate.
This just occurred to me, but you could also try putting an ad on Craigslist for a food stylist -- professional stylists have all kinds of tricks. It might be worth hiring one for a couple of sessions just for the learning experience.
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