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    Sea Side Beach in northern Florida... Picture for Critique...



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    f/22 25sec. 100ISO, 40mm. Taken with 50D with 24-105L.

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    Re: Sea Side Beach in northern Florida... Picture for Critique...



    <span style="font-size: small; font-family: Times New Roman;"]If it was doable, I would have added a bit more foregroundof the coast line wrapping around more to the right. Perhaps raised the horizon up so it was around the 2/3 part of the vertical.


    <span style="font-size: small; font-family: Times New Roman;"]Nice sky.

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    Re: Sea Side Beach in northern Florida... Picture for Critique...

    I agree that it might be a little better if either the edge of the coast and/or the sky were 2/3 of the way into the frame, but otherwise, great shot!

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    Re: Sea Side Beach in northern Florida... Picture for Critique...



    GSPhoto,


    I am an amateur, but I will say that I like the fact that you bisected the image with the horizon. It seems ever so slightly dark, but it's a beautiful shot. Where was it taken?

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    At St. Andrews Park in Panama City Beach, Florida.

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    This would make for an outstanding HDR shot. A little detail in the rocky shore....perfect. However, it's a great shot as it stands. Neat how the initial waterfront looks like a standing pool with a foamy coat. I love long exposure work. Keep it up!

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    Re: Sea Side Beach in northern Florida... Picture for Critique...



    It's beautiful.


    I agree with getting more of the shore, if you could.


    I have no opinion about where the horizon is, but I'd crop the top until you're near where the clouds start turning pink. that's where it really starts getting interesting.


    But, yeah, beautiful.

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