Quote Originally Posted by Sheiky
The bridge seems angled
I agree, that's an easy fix in DPP. Can you:
  1. Fix the bridge (make it parallel to the bottom of the frame, they ground your daughter is walking on may be sloped but the bridge should be level.
  2. Jack up the contrast (and I'm talking like +3 or +4 in DPP) this image is just wat to flat. I love black & white for conveying emotion. Sometimes colors take away from that goal. You need some drama though.
  3. This is just personal opinion but I don't care for the jagged ege treatment. I do however like the "frames" that you usually place on your uploads.
  4. Downsize to at least 800px so that nothing gets cut off
  5. If you're up for it, give us a color version too



Like Jan said, I think you're on to something. You just need to make some tweaks :-)


Looking forward to take-two!