Hey guys, just curious if any of you would be willing to offer a fresh set of eyes to my latest blog post? It feels half assed to me.. Is there anything you wish I had touched on? Any parts where you were thinking "Will he shut up already?" Any typos or grammar mistakes?

Any criticism would be so helpful. I struggled with this one for some reason!

As always, thanks for the help guys!

http://www.vierimagestudios.com/blog