The first dance. Pictures.

[hotsecretary]

1st one is a nice view, but I think you have too much of the ceiling in there, maybe crop it a bit?


And agreed on the little dark on some points..

[Dan Fleming]

These are awesome! I agree with the above posts, except that on my monitor the highlights appear ok...maybe my monitor is too bright. That being said a crop near their heads on the first one seems to work, that is all this little netbook shows on the screen at one time, which is where I got the idea.

[mattsartin]

love the 2nd one, not that the first is bad [] just good composition, i like the emotion it captures, nice work!

[Dave Johnston]

Thanks for your comments all. Now that I look back at it, that second one does seem a bit dark... I will try lighting it up a bit.


Originally, in the first shot there was a very large chandelier on the ceiling I tried to get into the picture... but at that focal length it looked distorted, and the flash bounce from the ceiling made the exposure on it look weird. I will try the crop out and see how it looks.


Thanks again.

[Dave Johnston]

Doh.... mess up