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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"]<span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"]Hi Alex,
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"]<span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"]Nice shots, I like the first better then the second, less busy.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"] With your second shot be aware of background, lighter colours and distractions will bring your eye to these areas first, that is why your first photo is so much better, maybe get your subject to sit / squat in front of the rock wall, don&rsquo;t have trees growing out of heads.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"]<span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"]Your first shot is very good the only suggestion I would make is the post production vignetting, I&rsquo;d get rid of it, great background, not distracting lighting is good, nice hair highlight.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"] Built in flash, don&rsquo;t like them but it has worked for you here, well done indeed.
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"]<span style="font-family: Times New Roman; font-size: small;"]Colour, sorry Australian spelling, color, I don&rsquo;t know, it just doesn&rsquo;t seem right, ie jeans look purplish / blue on my monitor.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"] Mate all in all really good job with a few tweaks, nice positioning of subject too, looks comfortable.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"] Keep up the good work.
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