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    Some Shots i Took the Other Day



    These are some shots taken with a Rebel T1i. Most of the processing was made on DPP, just added the signature onPhotoshopsince i haven't found a way to do it any easier. lol. Opinions andsuggestionsare welcomed.


    These are an italian male model and a russian female model. Location South beach. 15th floor.





    1/125, F12.9, ISO-400, 28-70 2.8 L @ 39mm








    1/128, F12.9, ISO-400, 28-70 2.8 L @ 31mm








    1/128, F4.6, ISO-400, 17-40 4.0 L @ 17mm

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    Re: Some Shots i Took the Other Day



    Third Shot is Awesome!


    Second is really, really good. It just looks like it needs some post effect to make it really pop. May a little more contrast and less saturation.


    First one, the burnt background is too burnt especially with the contrast of the background through the glass below the railing.

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    Booking tickets to Russia right now [:P]


    Great set - particularly like the third shot.
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    Quote Originally Posted by btaylor
    Booking tickets to Russia right now [img]/emoticons/emotion-4.gif[/img]

    Haha I was thinking in the same direction [:P]


    I like the second and third shot the most, love the backlighting. First picture misses too much background for me. The posing of the girl in the second is a bit strange to be honest. The "big dude" is looking very relaxed, chilled out and the girl just seems to be a little bit ??stiff?? I'm not sure how to say it.


    Anyway very nice shots!


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    keith


    u know that i hadn't even noticed that. Damn, lol, now im looking at it and im dissapointed ;( idk whether to white out the glassed part or idk what else to do, cuz i took it on jpg so i can't work with lower exposure.. ugh!!! i thought it was a good pix and i was blinded by it lol.


    thanks for the tip though really opened my eyes!.


    About the second one, let me see what i can do to it. But now im upset at the beach view through the glass also!!! ;(


    third one now looking at it, i think i need to white out the building details from everywhere.. and i really dislike her face being so lit up..





    btaylor & sheiky
    why booking to russia? Come to miami beach there are PLENTY to choose from . Specially now on spring break & beach time.





    Thanks for all the tips guys.






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    Quote Originally Posted by trosky
    First one now looking at it, i think i need to white out the building details from everywhere.. and i really dislike her face being so lit up..

    I think you're talking about the 3rd and I think it should be an easy fix, so don't worry too much []


    Quote Originally Posted by trosky
    why booking to russia? Come to miami beach there are PLENTY to choose from . Specially now on spring break & beach time.

    Haha I would love to go there sometime, but Miami isn't really high on my priority list. Certainly not for that one reason [:P]I don't complain for what I have now...at all [A]... but I'd love to go to America someday.


    Anyway good luck with post-processing I guess?

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    thanks alot for the tips & yeah, if ur sometime on Miami, let me know.

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    I love the 3rd shot. 1st shot would be a 2nd. Not too fond of the 3rd. Nice shooting though

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