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    I love it! [Y]

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    Much better without the boat. They're all nice shots. I don't want to be nit picky but the last shot you post appears to be suffering a little camera shake/ softness. The second shot at 33mm is much sharper. I think the best compromise here would be to clone out the sneaky little yellow russian sub in the 33mm image.


    Nice pics though mate, you've certainly got the "postcard" feel you were after.
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    Thanks you guys - and Btaylor - I'm actually looking for just the kind of critique you're making, so thank you too. Also I think you're right, the whole image appears a little muddy - not terrible, but it's a little over-saturated or the levels are off - something isn't right.


    It could be camera shake but that image was made at 1/2000 f/4. I'll convert it again and do a better job with the sharpness filter(s).


    worse comes to worse I'll take your advice and just clone out the water taxi.


    Thanks again you guys! I appreciate your help.

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