Does this work?

[Craig_7d]

The idea was to have the reflections in the windshield complement the image and give the subject a bit more mystique. Is this a good photo or trying too hard? Many thanks.


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[Sean Setters]

I suppose the somewhat opaqueness of the glass (a result of its reflection) adds the the mystique and requires me to stare longer at the subject to take in the detail.

[Scott]

Sorry doesn't work for me. Maybe something different in the reflection would work, I'd keep trying though.

[rlriii13]

It's very obvious that she's in a car. What's the significance of the car? If there is none, I might try using some different windows, or maybe just crop out the car indicators.

[Craig_7d]

Thanks everyone, your comments are really helpful to a newbie. Looking at it the day after, I agree the window serves as more a distraction than anything else. Will keep trying - thanks.


Craig

[Dallasphotog]

I like reflections off of glass better than this image where the image is coming through the glass...just me.

[BogdanD]

When I first saw the picture, I instantly thought "TV". I mean, I've seen this angle a lot in film (cinema), but not in photography. I do like the idea though, but perhaps the glass is a little too opaque for my taste. While I'm rolling with the movies idea, maybe it would have been better to include the reflection as a part of the subject? Right now it seems to distract...