Requesting Website assistance and critique

[bob williams]

Can you do sales through this site?
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Absolutely; and you can choose from several venders and products----Including digital/commercial licensing.


Bob

[bob williams]

OK folks, After a couple of weeks and many hours in front of this @#$$%%^^&amp;^&amp;* computer, most or all of the modifications suggested by you have been applied. So take a look and tell me what you think now, Please []


http://rwilliamsimaging.com/


What I did:


1. Put a "Buy" page in there to show commercial intent ( this was one of those workarounds that had to be done to make a "text page")


2.Putin an "About" Page with Photo and removed this section from the home page


3. Cleaned up a bunch of text, menus, etc.


4. Put Titles on the photos---This is tougher than it sounds--well, doing it was easy, thinking up titles was tough


5. Cleaned up the home page and matched fonts, colors etc


6. Eliminated a bunch of confusing garbage and unneccessary options.


8. Completed modified the pre-formated theme


9. Reformatted my slideshow pics to fit the slideshow frame


10, Added a frames to the photos


11. Added a few photos


12. Added key words to many photos---still a work in progress


13. Fixed the search problem


Did a bunch more stuff that I can't remember right now---Its an age thing-


So, please take another look and tell me whta you think---If you have additional suggestions for improve---I am all ears.


Thanks to all of you, I think the website looks much much better---We can call it a "team" project---Thanks


Bob

[bob williams]

Sorry for the re-post, I doubled thumbed the first one.

OK folks, After a couple of weeks and many hours in front of this @#$%%^^&amp;^&amp;* computer, most or all of the modifications suggested by you have been applied. So take a look and tell me what you think now, Please [img]/emoticons/emotion-2.gif[/img]


[url="http://rwilliamsimaging.com/]http://rwilliamsimaging.com/[/url]


What I did:


1. Put a "Buy" page in there to show commercial intent ( this was one of those workarounds that had to be done to make a "text page")


2.Putin an "About" Page with Photo and removed this section from the home page


3. Cleaned up a bunch of text, menus, etc.


4. Put Titles on the photos---This is tougher than it sounds--well, doing it was easy, thinking up titles was tough


5. Cleaned up the home page and matched fonts, colors etc


6. Eliminated a bunch of confusing garbage and unneccessary options.


8. Completed modified the pre-formated theme


9. Reformatted my slideshow pics to fit the slideshow frame


10, Added a frames to the photos


11. Added a few photos


12. Added key words to many photos---still a work in progress


13. Fixed the search problem


Did a bunch more stuff that I can't remember right now---Its an age thing-


So, please take another look and tell me whta you think---If you have additional suggestions for improve---I am all ears.


Thanks to all of you, I think the website looks much much better---We can call it a "team" project---Thanks


Bob


















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[bob williams]

Just and update for anyone interested.


While assisting me with the development of my Zenfolio web page, several of you commented on the non-intuitive purchasing functions and options. Well.....Zenfolio just released an update and they dramatically improved thepurchasing page and options.


The first thing you will noitice is that it now matches the theme of the webpage rather than some 3rd party site----Much better IMHO. I also think it is much more intuitive and understandable for potential buyers.


They also improved the marketing options----for a full list of improvements--LOOK HERE


If you want to see what it looks like from a potential buyers perspective--LOOK HERE, pic a photo and go through the buying options----of course you don't really have to buy [].


I know a couple of you were considering a Zenfolio account and had concerns about the "buy" options and presentation, so I thought this info would be useful.


Thanks again for all your help,


Bob

[ddt0725]

Thanks for the update, Bob! Looks like some beneficial changes were made!


Denise