I like the graininess. Quite a few people liked the "Edit this" assignment, why not put it up for folk to have a play with. You might like the result or maybe one or two might inspire you in a direction you hadn't thought of. Although you would need to figure out a way for people to download the image file. As for me my edit suggestions would be subtle; I would work on enhancing the mood and possibly a very-very slight sharpen on the swans because they are the final resting place for the eyes and need a little something. It's a lovely serene image, no wonder it did well. [Y]