Great stuff! I like it. I personally love one-liners, but I do think it would make this one silly and funny rather than serious. And I guess your aim to attract potential customers is more on the serious side.Originally Posted by freelanceshots
Since it's "Image Critique" section I would like to point out some things.
You probably have seen it already, but you're missing an "e" in freelanceshots.
I personally would burn out the background completely. It distracts a little. It distracted me at first down your hand, but then I saw it was the entire background. It also makes it look quite noisy on the left side of your face.
Other than that, I think it looks very good.
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