Some ideas

[freelanceshots]

I am missing an E, that needs to be fixed.

That is the shot as I used strobes with very selective lighting where everything else turned black/no light. The noise I think you are talking about is the texture of my skin unless I've got that wrong. Very low noise levels in this image. I don't really understand the suggestion to completely burn out the background. Sheiky are you meaning the evidence of my shirt and my hand? If I remove evidence of the shirt then it looks like my head is foating.

I got to maybe try and do something different then the bullet underneath freelanceshots. Is the vote to get rid of that? don't know how I would incorporate a speeding lens or smoking camera into the scene. I'll have to go back to the drawing board. My drawing skills are not at a super high level in photoshop.