Here is another. Please critique. Be as harsh as needed, I need to learn.



Lighting was a 28x28 softbox with a 430exII triggered by 580exII on camera(no fire) position at left almost right beside the subject at about 10:00 with a reflector on the right side of her. I had a vivitar flash dialed down very low shooting through a shoot through umbrella (43in) about 1:00 behind and beside the backdrop for a hair light. I was trying to feather the light as much as possible from the softbox. Processing again in Lightroom 4 with CS5 and the split tone preset 1 from LR4.