Looking for some critique

[Jayson]

Thank you for the suggestions and critiques.

Sean, I did have a the zoom set toward the wide end for those two. I actually made things smaller in PS before posting. I am going to try and find a little more space next time we have a shoot. Might have to move to the basement for a longer shoot.

JRW, I will definitely look into the videos on B&H. I have watched a couple videos by Niekirk and will definitely look into seeing a couple more. I hadn't thought of the ring until you mentioned it. I knew the eyes had a little too much white and will have her look at something else.

Thanks again!