Mark, beautiful photo! Lighting is perfect from my point of view.
Mark:
This is a great shot. I also went through your flickr post, and you have been on fire. You have a real knack for baby and family portraits. And I agree with Jayson, your lighting is spot on.
Pat
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Kudos Mark! Excellent shot!
Okay this isn't the traditional portrait shot, but I am trying something for a Valentine's gift.
What do you guys think of this? I added the text from the opening lines of her favorite book and displaced it over her photo.
"Sara"
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Cool concept Jayson.
#1 seems a little washed out. For example, there is very little detail to her nose. Regarding the words, if you think she will be able to understand the meaning by looking at it, great. But the source of the words doesn't jump out at me.
#2...the vertical lines are a little "The Matrix" esque. I would do something to break up the vertical pattern and give definition to her chin.
Of course, not trying to be critical, just suggestions, as I think the idea is great...and a lot better than what I had planned....which...ahhh...thanks for the reminder...I need to work on something.
Last edited by Zach; 03-24-2015 at 06:41 AM.
First one is really good