Hey Canoli,
Nice job with the crop! You're certainly getting it! Now, the bridge anchors the photo better. Ok.., now to keep it real, I think you over did the color adjustment a little on the cropped photo. The water, clouds and some of the buildings now look too green to me.
It's probably an optical Illusion that is magnified as we get closer and you're probably staring at it more since it's more of a focal point.
Since you are enjoying this thread, one other pointer that I noticed, would be to lower your tripod slightly in order to create some space or air in between that Island and the lower span at the center of the bridge, the same concept applies for boats or buildings, that may be visible under a span or archway. Sometimes, it's not possible because you can't move a fixed object, or as you lower your tripod the wide angle lens will catch a piece of the railing that you're standing in front of, but I just figured it's something to look for.
Keep up the good work!
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