Originally Posted by
Sheiky
The bridge seems angled
I agree, that's an easy fix in DPP. Can you:
- Fix the bridge (make it parallel to the bottom of the frame, they ground your daughter is walking on may be sloped but the bridge should be level.
- Jack up the contrast (and I'm talking like +3 or +4 in DPP) this image is just wat to flat. I love black & white for conveying emotion. Sometimes colors take away from that goal. You need some drama though.
- This is just personal opinion but I don't care for the jagged ege treatment. I do however like the "frames" that you usually place on your uploads.
- Downsize to at least 800px so that nothing gets cut off
- If you're up for it, give us a color version too
Like Jan said, I think you're on to something. You just need to make some tweaks :-)
Looking forward to take-two!
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