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    Still learning



    Feel free to critique me. I just finished reading Understanding Exposure by Bryan Peterson which has helped me alot, but I'm always open to more help. I took these with my Canon Rebel XS.





    18-55 mm lens - F/5.6, 1/300 at 55 mm.


    [img]/resized-image.ashx/__size/550x0/__key/CommunityServer-Discussions-Components-Files/15/8080.Hanging-Rock-085.jpg[/img]


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    18-55 mm lens - F/5.6, 1/400 at 35 mm -----^


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    55-250 mm lens- F/5.6, 1/2000 at 250 mm ------^


    Tell me what you think! Thanks!



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    Re: Still learning



    I like the second one a lot. nice composition.


    The first shot is rather overexposed, but that is an easy issue to fix next time.


    I also like the composition of the last one but think all the reflection off the water is a bit to distracting. I think something like a polarizer to cut the glare down would help the image.

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    Welcome to the community


    ISO ?


    Flash on the first one? The highlights on the flower middle were completly blown out.


    Seoncd one looks great.


    I think the third looks good, provided the silouete look is what you are going for, and you wanted the water reflection to be so blown out. That wasn't being critical, I think the picture works like it is.

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    Re: Still learning



    @ Vitale - Thank you for the advice on the polarized filter, I

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    GHicks


    On the first picture, if you shoot in RAW and you use DPP, you could take the exposrue down a bit and try taking the highlight down as well to salvage #1. Sometimes the detail will be there and you will be able to salvage it.

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    Re: Still learning



    I was completely unaware of that. haha. I

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    GHicks, welcome to the forum. your 3rd shot is my favorite.


    For the first shot, you could have also tried using Center-weighted or spot metering (not sure if the XS has spot metering) to achieve proper exposure on the flower. Happy shooting..


    Damian

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