Looks very sharp, but also looks like you sharpened it too much in post - am I right?


Looks like a bit underexposed as well, try to give it +1 stop.


Also (assuming you shoot RAW), try to play with the WB and warm it a bit since right now it looks too cold - thus boring to me.


All in all, very well done technically - you certainly got something there, you just need to play with it a bit more.