I would also say I am no expert, but my few comments are as follows:


1. The first two images are striking in their non-traditional lighting and pose. I like them a lot. The ring like in the pupil really draws attention to the eyes.


2. It looks like it was intentional, but I the second set of images seems under-exposed. But I think I am a bit more of a hi-key rather than low-key guy.


3. Good job over all just being up at 2am and experimenting. Makes me want to go buy more lights.