some more off camera speedlight pictures

[Dave Throgmartin]

Thanks guys. I made some tweaks per your suggestions. I shot this RAW so I changed the exposure to +2/3 from 0 and upped the sharpness.

I really do appreciate your help. This site has a number of excellent photographers (most with gear that far exceeds my humble 18-135 used in this picture!) that have excellent advice.

[Dave Throgmartin]

You know I just realized why I picked the EV value that I did... the plate is blown now in the re-do. DOH!

Thanks guys. I made some tweaks per your suggestions. I shot this RAW so I changed the exposure to +2/3 from 0 and upped the sharpness.

I really do appreciate your help. This site has a number of excellent photographers (most with gear that far exceeds my humble 18-135 used in this picture!) that have excellent advice.

[w349]

You know I just realized why I picked the EV value that I did... the plate is blown now in the re-do. DOH!

The plate doesn't appear blown to me, Dave. Unless you changed it again? The re-do seems better to my eye; the first was a little dark and a little cool.