Denise,
I do not really have any critique because you did an excellent job here. You did a great job controlling the light especially at the lake with the sun shinning towards their faces. I am sure you will get some print sales from this. You did a good job presenting some different PP to show them what options there are. I also deliver several of each pose. Often they like one but prefer their expression in another. This allows me to copy an expression and paste it in the image they prefer.
I look forward to viewing your next wedding.